I ever feel bad about
my self but i realized that I was wrong
Nothing interesting with my life, my daily life just like go
to my college for study. Honestly that I’m so very bad in English but i want to
study it. That’s why i choose English literature for my study in the college. I
mush study harder to make me be fluent in English. Sometimes I cry in the
middle of the night because worry everything about future. I just do like
many people do, worry about future. I jealous with people who have many talents
that I don't have one. I worry that I can’t face my own life. I just that the
type of girl who always failed in mats or English test when i was in my senior
high school but, I still try my best. I mush study hard to change my life. I
want to be better than ever. Lately I have new hobby, that I be writer on
wattpad. Because I feel not enough good to do everything, so I always
imagination that I have many talents. I always day dreaming have a good life,
so I think that I have much imagination, so why don’t I write it be a story.
I’m very glad that i got positive comments from my readers. Event thought it
still about thirteen chapters but I will not give up until it’s finish. It’s
to fast to give up with life. I will always be fight to find my ability and
always try it until I success.
Revision 1
I always blame my self because always failed doing
everything. I feel that I not enough good to this world. I always jealous with
everyone. How smart they are and how talented they are. When my friend was join
in the contest to read poetry and won, in the other side I got angry from my
teacher because I failed in my math test. I always feel bad to my self. I don't
have beautiful voice to sing a song, also I bad in the sport. Since I bad in my
school and never understand what teacher teach, i was often to made doodle in
my book. When my friend found my book full of doodle, they told me that my
doodle was good. They are said that I has talent to make a doodle. First I
very happy because that, but in the next day I realized that I not the only
person can made a doodle, everyone also can do it. So, I stop to make a doodle.
But, lately I realized that I was wrong, everyone have talent but not everyone
want to practice their talent. So right now, I’m not feel bad about my self
anymore. I was post my story that I made and posted it on wattpad application,
and I got many positive comments from my readers. I’m so glad that know I’m not
nothing anymore.
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