A Great Experience
During my last holiday, I just spent my time in my house, helped my mom and dad and I went to the church. Actually, I felt sad when holiday was coming. because of course I wont get money from my parents. But, no problem I'm still thankful for that. On September 8th , 2016 I was invited by my friend to work in EO(Event Organizer) for wedding event in Selabintana Hotel. Went I heard that I agreed with that plan to work in that EO(Event Organizer). I felt so happy because I have a job and I could get money. I was so proud of my job, because I could work in one of the event organizer in Sukabumi and learnt not to work other disappointed with my job. I learnt to work with other people and did a great job, even if the salary was low, but I felt so happy and was grateful for God’s blessing in my life. That’s my unforgettable memory and that’s one of the best experience of my life.
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A Great Experience
During my last holiday, I just spent my time in my house, helped my mom and dad to did some homework like sweeping, washing dishes and clothes, made cup of tea for my dad, and others. after that in every sunday I went to the church. Actually, I felt sad when holiday was coming, because of course I wont get money from my parents. But, no problem I'm still thankful for that. On September 8th , 2016 I was invited by my friend to work in EO(Event Organizer) for wedding event in Selabintana Hotel. Went I heard that I agreed with that plan to work in that EO(Event Organizer). I felt so happy because I have a job and I could get money. I was so proud of my job, because I could work in one of the event organizer in Sukabumi and learnt not to work other disappointed with my job and that its mean they trusted me to do that job. . I learnt to work with other people and did a great job, even if the salary was low, but I felt so happy and was grateful for God’s blessing in my life. That’s my unforgettable memory and that’s one of the best experience of my life.
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During my last holiday, I just spent my time in my house, helped my mom and dad to did some homework like sweeping on the floor of my house from behind until yard, washing dishes and clothes, made cup of tea for my dad in every morning, and others. after that in every sunday I went to the church with all of my family. Actually, I felt sad when holiday was coming, because of course I wont get money from my parents.But, no problem I'm still thankful for that.But I got learn when during my holiday at the time like how tired my mother to take care of the house in addition to her work but she also always perform her duties as a housewife and at the time I imagined might someday I would do what was done by my mother so I learn that homework can be done easily as long as we are willing to do it with a sincere heart and without having to complain first before doing it.Indeed it was exhausting homework like you have to clean up all the items scattered on the floor, wash the plates and cups, and other .But when it saw the results there must be a sense of satisfaction and it was fun. So that my great experience when my last holiday and until now I’m still do it.
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A Great Experience
During my last holiday, I just spent my time in my house, helped my mom and dad to did some homework like sweeping on the floor of my house from behind until yard, washing dishes and clothes, made cup of tea for my dad in every morning, and others. after that in every sunday I went to the church with all of my family. Actually, I felt sad when holiday was coming, because of course I wont get money from my parents.But, no problem I'm still thankful for that.But I got learn when during my holiday at the time like how tired my mother to take care of the house in addition to her work but she also always perform her duties as a housewife and at the time I imagined might someday I would do what was done by my mother so I learn that homework can be done easily as long as we are willing to do it with a sincere heart and without having to complain first before doing it.Indeed it was exhausting homework like you have to clean up all the items scattered on the floor, wash the plates and cups, and other .But when it saw the results there must be a sense of satisfaction and it was fun. So that my great experience when my last holiday and until now I’m still do it.
Author : Viona Larissa Putriane/1530911006
THE MOMENT BEFORE I GRADUATED FROM JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL
Right before I graduated from junior high school, me and my classmates went to salabintana to have a picnic. The teacher told us to buy presents which must've been cheaper than 20k rupiahs. I decided to buy a white veil because all of my classmates were girls. And yeah, the price was cheaper than 20k rupiahs.Right after we arrived there, the teacher told us to make a round. We sang a song and moved our presents from one hand to the other. The teacher told us to close our eyes while singing, then when she said "stop," we could open our eyes to see what present that we would’ve gotten. I open my eyes steadily to see what I got. And VOILA! I got a cute red glass with "I love coffee" text written on it. It was a really cute glass so I decided to put it on my table in my bedroom. The glass is still there though. It's been one of the things that I keep up until now.
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THE MOMENT BEFORE GRADUATED FROM JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL
When I was in junior high school, one month before I graduated,me and my classmates went to salabintana to have a picnic. The teacher told us to buy presents which must've been cheaper than 20k rupiahs. I decided to buy a white veil because all of my classmates were girls. And yeah, the price was cheaper than 20k rupiahs.Right after we arrived there,we had gatherig lunch after that the teacher told us to make a round. We sang a song and moved our presents from one hand to the other. The teacher told us to close our eyes while singing, then when she said "stop," we could open our eyes to see what present that we would've gotten. I open my eyes steadily to see what I got. And VOILA! I got a cute red glass with "I love coffee" text written on it. It was a really cute glass so I decided to put it on my table in my bedroom. The glass is still there though. It's been one of the things that I keep up until now.
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THE MOMENT BEFORE GRADUATED FROM JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL
When I was in junior high school, one month before I
graduated,me and my classmates went to salabintana to have a picnic. The
teacher told us to buy presents which must've been cheaper than 20k rupiahs. I
decided to buy a white veil because all of my classmates were girls. And yeah,
the price was cheaper than 20k rupiahs and the present must be cover by news
papers.Right after we arrived there,we had gatherig lunch after that the
teacher told us to make a round. We sang our jonior high school’s song and
moved our presents from one hand to the other. The teacher told us to close our
eyes while singing, then when she said "stop," we could open our eyes
to see what present that we would've gotten. I open my eyes steadily to see
what I got. And VOILA! I got a cute red glass with "I love coffee"
text written on it. It was a really cute glass so I decided to put it on my
table in my bedroom. The glass is still there though. It's been one of the things
that I keep up until now.
Author : Rinrin Suniarti/1530911022
MY HOBBY
Cooking, cooking is very interesting, I like cooking, because my cooking is very good. But I did not really understand a lot of cooking recipe. My mother suggested to learn more about cooking. I was very imperessed when I saw my mother was cooking. Because I think, when someone can cooking it's look so sexy. I hope I can be a famous chef and I can have own restaurant.
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MY HOBBY
Cooking, cooking is very interesting because I can do some experiment and find the diferrence taste of the food. One of my favorite homemade meals is spaghetti. I love cooked homemade meals because its more healthy. For me cooking is also an enjoyable thing to do as well as it being special hobby. When I finished cooking I feel proud of my cuisine. And I think, when someone can cooking its look so sexy. I hope I can be a famous chef and I can have own restaurant.
Author : Diana Putri Sonjaya/1530911005
SCOUT
When I was elementary school I like scout because I think scout interested and fun. Makes everyone can be happy and enjoyed by it. My teacher when I was elementary school ordered us to join the competition in scout. Then, we brought to event of scout. From that, we have many experience in competition, especially in scout and get confident.
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SCOUT
When I was elementary school I like scout, because I think scout are interested and fun. Makes everyone can be happy and enjoyed by it, there are many games in scout. My teacher when I was elementary school ordered us to join the competition in scout. Then, we brought to event of scout. There are many participants who followed competition, all participant were spirit. From that, we have many experience in competition, especially in scout and get confident.
Author : Dede Rahman/1530911023
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When I was elementary school I like scout, because I think scout are interested and fun. Makes everyone can be happy and enjoyed by it, there are many games in scout. My teacher when I was elementary school ordered us to join the competition in scout. Then, we brought to event of scout. There are many participants who followed competition, all participant were spirit. From that, we have many experience in competition, especially in scout and get confident.
Author : Dede Rahman/1530911023
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SCOUT
When I was elementary school I like scout, because I think scout are interested and fun. Makes everyone can be happy and enjoyed by it, there are many games in scout. My teacher when I was elementary school ordered us to join the competition in scout. Then, we brought to event of scout. There are many participants who followed competition, all participant were spirit. From that, we have many experience in competition, especially in scout and get confident.
Author : Dede Rahman/1530911023
MY BEDROOM
My favourite room in the family’s house is my bedroom. Cause what? Because my bedroom is very enjoyable place for me. My bedroom is not too large and not too small just an ordinary bedroom. I’m spend most of the time at there. I’m take a rest in it when I tired and then I relaxed, felt better and so comfortable. Maybe, everyone used the bedroom just for take a nap or take a rest. But for me, the bedroom is more than that. I can expressioned anything, such as the happiness.
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MY BEDROOM
My favourite room in the family’s house is my bedroom. Cause what? Because my bedroom is very enjoyable place for me like my bed its so comfortable, the interior is very girly because the colour of all my property such as my cupboard, the wall, the bedsheet, the carpet is pink and i love it. And the atmosphere so fresh. I’m spend most of the time at there such as reading book, watched movie, and others. I’m take a rest in it when I tired and then I relaxed, felt better and so comfortable. Maybe, everyone used the bedroom just for take a nap or take a rest. But for me, the bedroom is more than that. I can expressioned anything, such as the happiness.
Author : Agnesha Agustya/3091311033
I ever feel bad about my self but i realized that I was wrong
Nothing interesting with my life, my daily life just like go to my college for study. Honestly that I’m so very bad in English but i want to study it. That’s why i choose English literature for my study in the college. I mush study harder to make me be fluent in English. Sometimes I cry in the middle of the night because worry everything about future. I just do like many people do, worry about future. I jealous with people who have many talents that I don't have one. I worry that I can’t face my own life. I just that the type of girl who always failed in mats or English test when i was in my senior high school but, I still try my best. I mush study hard to change my life. I want to be better than ever. Lately I have new hobby, that I be writer on wattpad. Because I feel not enough good to do everything, so I always imagination that I have many talents. I always day dreaming have a good life, so I think that I have much imagination, so why don’t I write it be a story. I’m very glad that i got positive comments from my readers. Event thought it still about thirteen chapters but I will not give up until it’s finish. It’s to fast to give up with life. I will always be fight to find my ability and always try it until I success.
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I always blame my self because always failed doing everything. I feel that I not enough good to this world. I always jealous with everyone. How smart they are and how talented they are. When my friend was join in the contest to read poetry and won, in the other side I got angry from my teacher because I failed in my math test. I always feel bad to my self. I don't have beautiful voice to sing a song, also I bad in the sport. Since I bad in my school and never understand what teacher teach, i was often to made doodle in my book. When my friend found my book full of doodle, they told me that my doodle was good. They are said that I has talent to make a doodle. First I very happy because that, but in the next day I realized that I not the only person can made a doodle, everyone also can do it. So, I stop to make a doodle. But, lately I realized that I was wrong, everyone have talent but not everyone want to practice their talent. So right now, I’m not feel bad about my self anymore. I was post my story that I made and posted it on wattpad application, and I got many positive comments from my readers. I’m so glad that know I’m not nothing anymore.
Author: Elsa mayora putri 1630913001
